journal

1.    1.  I am proud that I was able to find good and reliable sources that tied into one another well.

2.    2. I would take the time to add more aspects to what females find attractive in a guy such as voice intonation or body composition.

3.     3.The first draft benefitted me the most because, I was able to get feedback from you on it which helped me better my layout and write the rest of my essay.

4.     4. I learned how to search for reliable sources. I also learned how to be less bias when writing a paper which I feel will help me a lot in the future.

5.I would change the way the outline is formatted. I would rather have more freedom to make it however I think will help me write my essay