Finishing the Essay
I received a lot of really good, positive but constructive feedback during peer review. My peers pointed out the positives in my paper, which I will elaborate more on, and they pointed out a few things that still need to be done/polished. Before I turn in my final draft, I plan on adding a little more analysis of the lyrics and sources that I discussed in my paper and explaining why they're relevant (and adding citations). I also need to add my literature review to incorporate the sources I used in my annotated bibliography, and I need to formulate a solid conclusion.
I think that the meetings are what helped me the most in figuring out what needed to be changed. I also had to elaborate a lot so that I could incorporate my opinion better. I felt that overall all the feedback I received was very helpful.
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