Final draft

           For my final draft I had to change a few things but for me it was mainly adding information and combing old information. For example I made an abstract without knowing we didn't need one in out paper for the first draft however I did like it so I had to add it into my introduction. Another thing is I did my lit. reviews incorrectly so I had to change them but like the abstract I liked a lot of the information I had in that part of the essay so I added it to the arguments instead. So the biggest thing for me was to try and make everything together in its new spots nicely.