Final Draft
For my final draft, I had to improve most of my paper.
I changed my introduction to include questions. I added a literature review because
my first draft was missing that. I refigured the structure of my body paragraphs and I wrote a conclusion. Finally, I checked for any grammar mistakes. My peer’s
review gave me some direction on how to improve my introduction and some of my
body paragraphs that needed more specific examples. Honestly, I feel like I
need a nap after tackling that beast of a paper all weekend.
I agree that this paper was a lot of work. I felt that everything always needs more editing. I felt that overall it was useful and ill help us when we are forced to write other papers like this.
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