Essay2 Review
1. What are you most proud of in this essay?
I feel that my lit review section is very strong. I also am very proud of the amount of time i spent on the essay. I printed, read, and annotated all my sources and I went in for extra help. I hope this extra effort is reflected in my paper.
2. What would you change or add?
I feel pretty confident in my essay. In retrospect, I would have enjoyed creating and conducting my own survey to include in my essay just for fun.
3. From the processes of annotated bib, outline, and multiple drafts which one benefited you most and how?
Although I did not follow my outline very strictly I still think it was very useful because it gave me an idea of where wanted my essay to go and my first draft is an adjustment of what I learned after my annotated bib. I would also say my annotated bib was very important because it created the foundation of my lit review.
4. What did you learn?
I learned about the difference between positive thinking and positive fantasies and how to adjust my emotional needs to better myself and my friends in school and in daily living. From a literary perspective I learned how to incorporate sources in an effective and persuasive manner.
5. What would you change?
I'd probably include another draft and conference. Essays are always better with more time and I know that I personally needed an extra conference to feel more secure about my paper.
I feel that my lit review section is very strong. I also am very proud of the amount of time i spent on the essay. I printed, read, and annotated all my sources and I went in for extra help. I hope this extra effort is reflected in my paper.
2. What would you change or add?
I feel pretty confident in my essay. In retrospect, I would have enjoyed creating and conducting my own survey to include in my essay just for fun.
3. From the processes of annotated bib, outline, and multiple drafts which one benefited you most and how?
Although I did not follow my outline very strictly I still think it was very useful because it gave me an idea of where wanted my essay to go and my first draft is an adjustment of what I learned after my annotated bib. I would also say my annotated bib was very important because it created the foundation of my lit review.
4. What did you learn?
I learned about the difference between positive thinking and positive fantasies and how to adjust my emotional needs to better myself and my friends in school and in daily living. From a literary perspective I learned how to incorporate sources in an effective and persuasive manner.
5. What would you change?
I'd probably include another draft and conference. Essays are always better with more time and I know that I personally needed an extra conference to feel more secure about my paper.
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