ESSAY IMPROVEMENT

I am planning to make my essay more clear and iron out some points. I also will work on my grammar when doing my final draft. My rough drafts tend not to focus on so much grammar, which is bad but also it is fine. When working on rough drafts, I am always so caught up in making sure my main argument is evident that I do not really concern myself with the grammar aspect.

Hopefully this will be my best paper yet!