Changes to Final Draft

          Overall, I mostly received positive feedback on my research essay draft. However, there is no such thing as a perfect paper, there is always areas in which I can improve. So, based on the feedback I received, I plan to find replacement words for the word "cell phone" so my essay does not seem repetitive. In addition, I need to write a new literary review because I had the wrong idea of what a literary review was. So, I am going to rewrite my new literary review with all of the sources that I used throughout my paper. Also, I need to add my bibliography into my final draft, along with adding a few in-text citations. Although the changes I plan to make are not drastic, I feel that these simple changes will tremendously improve the overall grade and structure of my final paper.