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Between the first and final draft of project 1, I feel I improved most upon my analytical skills and paragraph construction. I was able to gain a deeper understanding on both adaptations of my story, identifying genre changes and properly writing my findings in the ideal format.

            The most important thing I learned from this project was how not to stress over a first draft too much. I feel whenever we come up with an idea of an essay, we try to jump right into it without full analyzing our topics. This paper helps me calm down and realize how to slowly process my work.

            If I had more time to work on my paper, I would give more detail on some of the topics. I feel like every time I write, I’m always lacking detail. I wish I could use more detail in effort to further my analysis.

            Make it an argumentative essay. I rather make the writing process easier for everyone, cause then there would be less stress and more effort. I felt like I didn’t do one hundred percent on this paper sole because I was not familiar with the essay style. The essay would’ve been way better and easier if it was argumentative.