Journal two

1. While writing the first project I feel that what I most improved on from my first draft to the final draft was the examples and the extent on which I elaborated what I was thinking.

2. The most important thing I learned from the first project is the more you elaborate the better the essay as a whole plus you get a higher word count. I learned this through writing on my own but I also learned it from the class and the peer review session because we did go over it and they gave me advice on to where to add more detail or explain certain scenes.

3. If I had another week to work on my essay I'm not sure what I would add to it I would get advice from a friend or someone who knows what there talking about and add on from there.

4. If I could rewrite the project prompt in the syllabus I don't think I would change anything because I don't see the need in changing the prompt.