Journal time

1. My final draft was much more defined and focused than by first draft. I felt like my draft was very unorganized and might have gotten off topic. 
2. I learned that I miss my mom who could go over the paper with me right next to me, but I made up for it by sending her my final draft and her going over that one. I also learned that teachers are a very good resource to use because if you talk to them about it you know exactly what they're looking for. 
3. I would not change anything at all. Once I think a paper is done I do not mess with it anymore or else I will go insane. I believe I got all my points across so I truly do not know what else I would add. 
4. Say that they could use the same platforms like two movies along as you focus on how they are two separate genres. As long as they get that point across I don't think that the platforms should stop them. One reason being because I did that and it was approved so it must not be so bad.