journal prompt

1. While writing project one I think that I mostly improved on writing structure, following the proper set up to maximize my essay. I also think I really improved on incorporating good transition words. Finally, I think i really improved on creating a strong thesis.
2. I think that the most important thing that I learned from this whole experience is the importance of a thesis sentence. I used to use generic and not hard hitting thesis sentences. Now, I have learned how to properly create a strong thesis that will better my essay as a whole.
3. If i had another week to work on my essay, I would work on adding as much examples as I could. I would also try to incorporate more literary devices like ethos, pathos, similes, and just more figurative language. I would condense my paper down and only write strong points that are needed not extra information that does not contribute to my thesis.
4. If I had the chance to rewrite the project prompt, I really do not think I would change much, all i would maybe do is make it less words. But, I feel that everything we were required to do in the prompt was vital information that was needed to create an interesting essay. I have to say I enjoyed writing this paper.