journal 2

1. The area of my paper that improved the most was probably the organization in my first draft i had ideas and phrases all around split up into different sentences or even different paragraphs, but by the end I had a some sort of organizational structure and it all made sense.
2. I found out that the most important part of the write g process is to have different drafts because 99 percent of the time your first draft can and will suck. i also learned that even the most experienced writers use this technique and its not out of the ordinary. 
3. If I had another week to change my paper I would focus on finding more direct scenes and quotes from the movie and book to back up my points because I felt that was one area my paper was lacking in. 
4. If i could rewrite the prompt i would have it put a bigger emphasis on genre conventions and not so much of a compare and contrast paper. I liked it overall though and thought it was an interesting topic to write about.