Journal 2
1. I think that I improved by adding more details and I had more of a well-rounded essay at the end. After meeting with the professor I think it improved even more because I got a lot of useful tips that helped me better understand how to format my essay. Also, I think that with all the drafts we had to do it helped me focus my essay on exactly what I wanted to write.
2. The most important thing I learned from this project/the writing process, is that making multiple drafts can be very beneficial and improves my writing a lot. With each draft I added more to my essay and made it more clear.
3. If I had another week to work on my essay I would look back over it and see if I could put in any more points that would add to my essay.
4. I don't think I would change anything in the writing prompt in the syllabus. I felt that it was very clear and thorough about what to do for this assignment.
2. The most important thing I learned from this project/the writing process, is that making multiple drafts can be very beneficial and improves my writing a lot. With each draft I added more to my essay and made it more clear.
3. If I had another week to work on my essay I would look back over it and see if I could put in any more points that would add to my essay.
4. I don't think I would change anything in the writing prompt in the syllabus. I felt that it was very clear and thorough about what to do for this assignment.
Hi Jade
ReplyDeleteIt's great to learn that you enjoy writing and that our conference has assisted you so much! Also, I'm happy to see that multiple drafting has helped you in your writing process