Journal 2: Prompt
1. I believe I improved quite a bit while doing the drafts especially the transition from the first to the last one. I started not really knowing exactly what to write and how to write it, to being able to understand the overall structure that there should be and being able to do my essay in that structure.
2. I believe the conference helped me out the most and I learned that I am a very repetitive person which was prior knowledge, but It is good to have it brought up on my writing. I also was shown how to control my writing better since I'm all over the place with details to better control my writing and make it, make better sense to the reader.
3. If I had another week to work on this piece I believe that I would make it gradually better. I would continually fix wording errors and make the essay more understandable and work o the flow of my ideas that I trying to publish. I believe I would still need to change a lot, it would be nice to have another conference and another peer review. My formatting or structure could use a little more work I believe and that I would work on that probably the most, until I figured out how to properly write the essay in the best way possible.
4. I don't think I would change anything other than the word assignment just because I don't like writing long essays. Other than that it was a great piece which brought a new view to my eyes. It is interesting to write about things that I not used to writing about, it's how you improve as a writer. So I'm glad to write about challenging topics it is the best help to my writing.
2. I believe the conference helped me out the most and I learned that I am a very repetitive person which was prior knowledge, but It is good to have it brought up on my writing. I also was shown how to control my writing better since I'm all over the place with details to better control my writing and make it, make better sense to the reader.
3. If I had another week to work on this piece I believe that I would make it gradually better. I would continually fix wording errors and make the essay more understandable and work o the flow of my ideas that I trying to publish. I believe I would still need to change a lot, it would be nice to have another conference and another peer review. My formatting or structure could use a little more work I believe and that I would work on that probably the most, until I figured out how to properly write the essay in the best way possible.
4. I don't think I would change anything other than the word assignment just because I don't like writing long essays. Other than that it was a great piece which brought a new view to my eyes. It is interesting to write about things that I not used to writing about, it's how you improve as a writer. So I'm glad to write about challenging topics it is the best help to my writing.
Hi Adra
ReplyDeleteI'm happy to learn that the conferences assisted you so much! It's great that you know your flaws as a writer and we will have plenty of opportunity to work on it.