Journal 2: Prompt

1. During the writing of project 1, I think what I improved on the most between my first and final drafts is my understanding of the reasons as to why the two genres I chose were represented differently. In my first draft I didn't really have a well crafted idea as to the significance of the different changes in the adaptation but that's something I developed more and included in my final draft.
2. The most important thing I learned from this project was from the conference where it was brought to my attention that I could go a little more in depth in my analysis of certain elements that were consistent in both adaptations as well as the differences between the two.
3. If I had another week to work on my essay I would try to work on my sentence structures more, especially my transitions into different topic. I felt that at times when I moved on to a different topic it wasn't much of a smooth transition. Furthermore, I think I would work on my conclusion more. My conclusion seemed a little too boring and repetitive and I kind of felt like I just threw it all together just so I could be done sooner.
4. If I could rewrite the project prompt in the syllabus, I probably wouldn't change it because it conveyed the general mission of the project as well as what needed to be included.