Project 2 Feedback

Based on the feedback I received, I will make a few changes to my paper that I was already planning on making from my conference. First, I need to analyze my quotes more to better utilize the many citations I use in the paper. That is the biggest issue that needs to be resolved with my paper. The only other issues that need to be resolved is to segment my paragraphs and to add a bit more to my literature review. My feedback was mostly positive, mostly saying my paper is good. One criticism I got was that the quotes were too long, but there is very little I can do about that, I cut them as short as I could. My peers found my essay to be interesting, so that's a good sign for me. I look forward to finishing this essay in the next day.